Welcome Indeed Anthony - where is the photo taken?
This tune is an enigma. It didn’t ring my bell the 1st listen, but i got my head into gear and thought hmmm this is really something special...a bit like naieve kunst...like a Lowry painting, the closest thing it reminded me Sunshine on Leith by the proclaimers... my heart was broken repeated.. now if your heart is really broken you cant think of much at all, except that your heart is broken, and this song is similar....
Ideas for production..hmmmm.. drop the acoustic gtr during the electric gtr part to give it proper contrast between the sections...a cleaner crunch overdrive rather than too distorted may be more hooky...wondering about keeping the drums as is for the verses but more bluesy drums for the e guitar part.
I think the closer you can make the lead vocal the more personal the message will be, watch out for the popping Ps though..aim you voice off mic.
Like the so simple bass line.
Tiny embellishments will work well on this as it’s so bare, think of them as sparkles that listeners will want to hear when you play it live just be so subtle with them.
Oh yeah, and just a single unprocessed acoustic gtr for the verses...
Maybe put it left of centre to avoid clashing with the vox...
Hope this helps.
Look forward to hearing what you do with it.