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LizNic

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« on: August 14, 2019, 03:45:17 AM »
Hi all! I am new to this forum, I think is a wonderful tool for collaboration!

I not a native english speaker, but I have wrote some songs in english *because I think english fit best with the melody.  Your feedback in lyrics will be very welcomed!  I would also love to hear other ideas about kind of arrangements that could fit best the song.


You can listen here: https://soundcloud.com/user-19881515/premix-the-real-you

Here are the lyrics: What I want to tell with this song is that you need to be your self, because most of the times we are just acting, not being our selves.

THE REAL YOU

Somebody else, to be somebody else
Oh, I believe I’m always in a dream
I just see that other people change
But I´m still waiting for the time to change my self

Somebody else, to be somebody else
Would you be who you’re supposed to be?
I wanna be the one who broke the frame
I believe in my particularity
               
All the time you are acting well, as you real you
But you know this is not really true
Show the real you, I believe in you
Just becoming yourself

Somebody else, to be somebody else
Do you think you’re fitting very well?
Don’t you wanna be the one who broke the frame?
Is the best if you want at least survive

All the time you are acting well, as you real you
But you know this is not really true
Show the real you, I believe in you
Just becoming yourself