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LostBoy

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« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2019, 10:43:55 PM »
Hey man,

Lots to like here! Your guitar work is exceptional and the slow build is fab! Singing is nice too. I just personally struggled to stay engaged for 8 minutes when there is no distinguishable hook. That’s just me though....😄👍🏻 If u were trying to write a “single” well then of course you would have written a different song....if, for you, this song only works at this length, then that’s absolutely fine. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻I do love long long songs aswell....(I have a thing for Genesis🤪) but I just need hooks.

Thanks for sharing this with us mate! Nice one!