Writing this as I hear it for the frist time...
Like the Vocal presentation, nice and strong, grows well, drums sound OK, strat sound solo gtr sounds cool, love the room verb. (tell me about the guitar gear you used, nice indeed)
You probably know that I'm rubbish with lyrics, I have no idea what the story is about, I'm always listening to the guitars and production...
Sometimes the production is a little busy from around 6:00..I began to lose interest, only the superb guitar soloing kept me there)
btw love the picture of you on the table...
Hope it helps...