Hi Killjoy, I was left feeling there's a really good song buried in here, but it's not poking through yet. Your voice is obviously great, very expressive, and it sounds heartfelt. The recording is pretty muddy though, I couldn't make out your lyrics for most of it, you sound a bit drenched in reverb and the piano sounds a long way from the mike. I hope you re-record this and add some sharpness and some more production, sculpting it a bit more so that the choruses distinguish themselves from the verses. All that said there is definitely buried treasure here, I hope you persevere with it. Pauly