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Neil C

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« Reply #15 on: August 14, 2019, 05:13:08 PM »
Paul,
Classic tune and inventive modern lyrics.
Liking the simple backdrop - feels like a lost standard.
Nothing to mention at all
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neil
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« Reply #16 on: August 14, 2019, 07:09:44 PM »
Hey Paul,

This is smart and melodic.  Wonderfully crafted songwriting.  A delight to listen to!

Paul
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Paulski

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« Reply #17 on: August 19, 2019, 01:36:16 PM »
@Neil C , @Wicked Deeds - thank you kind gentlemen. Cheers for listening - I appreciate the feedback means a lot coming from your talented selves  ;D

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« Reply #18 on: August 22, 2019, 10:28:08 PM »
So clever – you’re so good at creative, clever lyrics @paulski . Touching, sweet song– which is not easy (for me at least) to do without being cheesy… Gotta love a 1+1 -  especially when this well performed..

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« Reply #19 on: August 26, 2019, 09:28:10 AM »
The title put me off a little as I really didn't know how it was going to work, and I do slightly wonder if the penny would drop if I was hearing this without the lyrics (gulp!).

Having said all that, I really did enjoy it, everything in its place and beautifully delivered. First verse was my particular fave.

Very clever and fun.