I Believed (But Now I See)

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Paulski

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« Reply #15 on: August 06, 2019, 11:31:43 PM »
Great great song @Jambrains  ;D
Love the tempo and of course the stellar vocals.
Production is top drawer too. Love the piano.
My personal pref would be more verb on the snare to give it depth but I'm scrapin' to find nits here.  ;D ;D
Good stuff!
Paul

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« Reply #16 on: August 07, 2019, 12:13:46 AM »
Well thank God for aging and Karen because this is a beautiful song JB  :) The arrangement is superb...keeps your interest throughout  :) 
the lovely piano balances out the heavy lyrics. stellar production.  8) One of my favs of yours  :-*

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« Reply #17 on: August 09, 2019, 11:06:57 AM »
Great stuff. I think when I imagine myself as a great keyboardist, this is what I imagine sitting down and playing.

Love the arrangement and atmosphere. And I am a sucker for a contrasting breakdown/middle8.

Two things that felt ever so slightly 4 stars instead of 5:
- misconceived (pause) dangers and enemies - I'd really try to keep them joined up (by drawing out the syllables or breaking with rhythm...)
- what was given - sounded a bit anticlimactic if just two identical 8th notes - I'd like a jump up or down to the "en"...

But just one listener's (picky) thoughts. A really enjoyable ballad.