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kaalbas:
Hey

I Need some help writing the right lyrics to my song. What feeling do you get from the song melody?

Thank Michael

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CaliaMoko:
Two things come to my mind right away...but not anything helpful. :(

1. I don't hear a melody, and although I can make one up to the accompaniment, I don't know if it's what you have in mind.

2. It would help if you already have some kind of idea what mood or topic or theme you want for the song. Do you have anything at all in mind for a story for the lyric?

kaalbas:
I have fought about something like going through something difficult and coming out stronger. Maybe "through the fire". But does it fit the song?

CaliaMoko:

--- Quote from: kaalbas on July 07, 2019, 07:45:29 AM ---I have fought about something like going through something difficult and coming out stronger. Maybe "through the fire". But does it fit the song?
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I'm no expert, but I think it fits the mood.

LizNic:
Do you have the melody? The background sounds great!

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