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RealKevM

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« on: July 05, 2019, 08:23:54 PM »
I wrote this one in about half an hour (maybe you can tell? lol) but to me it's probably one of my strongest songs yet, definitely more of a rock element to it. There's even a little guitar solo of sorts at the end! Please let me know what you think :)

Walk into the room like i'm Liam G
Playing my tunes like i'm Gerry C
Underneath the sky of a Courteeners flare
I love how it shines on your golden hair

Are you coming
Are you coming with me
Hold on now darling
You're coming with me

No they'll never
Make a monkey out of me
All i'm asking is
For you to believe
And if all I have is this moment right now
I'm singing the blues
Before I go down



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« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2019, 03:28:42 PM »
Hi Kev,

Cool lyrics and I can hear where your are going,

Its all there, just the phrasing of the lyrics need changing to flow along with the track,

Sounds cool matey.

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« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2019, 08:31:19 PM »
Cheers man, to be fair I was reading the lyrics off a bit of paper as I couldn't remember them all at the time lol

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« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2019, 12:52:08 PM »
I played this live for the first time yesterday, I ended up doing it a bit fast but i'd love to hear what you think to it


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« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2019, 05:23:19 PM »
This is great, Kev! It's a good tune, and you perform it well live and acoustic. To be a first-time-play for this song you did good, and I am excited to see your development :)
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« Reply #5 on: July 15, 2019, 10:47:01 PM »
Cheers @Younger Hills, really appreciated!

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« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2019, 01:07:03 PM »
@RealKevM - Kev, your playing, delivery and writing all seem to be improving very rapidly, what do put that down to?

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« Reply #7 on: July 23, 2019, 01:29:45 PM »
Thank you @cowparsleyman well i've been studying video of Richard Ashcroft and his live solo stuff and studying what he does and the way he phrases things, change in tone and melody etc and it's give me some shape to my voice. I've also found that singing with more strength and passion makes me sound a whole lot better too and easier to sing in tune (or nearer to in tune lol) but yes it is quite remarkable isn't it?