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RealKevM:
I wrote this one in about half an hour (maybe you can tell? lol) but to me it's probably one of my strongest songs yet, definitely more of a rock element to it. There's even a little guitar solo of sorts at the end! Please let me know what you think :)

Walk into the room like i'm Liam G
Playing my tunes like i'm Gerry C
Underneath the sky of a Courteeners flare
I love how it shines on your golden hair

Are you coming
Are you coming with me
Hold on now darling
You're coming with me

No they'll never
Make a monkey out of me
All i'm asking is
For you to believe
And if all I have is this moment right now
I'm singing the blues
Before I go down

Cawproductions:
Hi Kev,

Cool lyrics and I can hear where your are going,

Its all there, just the phrasing of the lyrics need changing to flow along with the track,

Sounds cool matey.

RealKevM:
Cheers man, to be fair I was reading the lyrics off a bit of paper as I couldn't remember them all at the time lol

RealKevM:
I played this live for the first time yesterday, I ended up doing it a bit fast but i'd love to hear what you think to it

Andreas:
This is great, Kev! It's a good tune, and you perform it well live and acoustic. To be a first-time-play for this song you did good, and I am excited to see your development :)

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