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RealKevM:
@Dogmax Thanks man, you're right it's all about the dynamics, advice noted.

@Cawproductions Cheers dude, very encouraging :)

Cawproductions:
Just had another listen to this,

Heres what I would do,
On the verse, play gently with the same rhythm, and let your vocal tell the story
Then build up the playing intensity into the chorus and let the stronger playing with your vocal ram the message home.
After the chorus get all down again, draw the listener back in.

Great work Kev, good song too just need to get some playing dynamics in.

And as usual, just my crazy way, not the highway.

Cheers
Andy

RealKevM:
Cheers Andy, no you're right, I definitely need to introduce some dynamics. Thank you!

RealKevM:
I recorded a new version yesterday, it's nice and acoustic and pretty decent I think...please have a listen and let me know your thoughts, I think it could be my best song

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