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« Reply #15 on: July 07, 2019, 03:32:10 PM »
No no you misunderstand me. I haven't cut down my intro....wouldn't do that for anybody!
I was just saying that your intro was fairly long too....only ten seconds shorter than mine!
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« Reply #16 on: July 07, 2019, 04:38:13 PM »
I have a rule, no intro longer than 15 secs,

I read somewhere that a commercial tune must follow this rule,

Could be total Bo**ocks but must be true, it was on the internet. pahhahhaaa.

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« Reply #17 on: July 07, 2019, 06:47:35 PM »
No no you misunderstand me. I haven't cut down my intro....wouldn't do that for anybody!
I was just saying that your intro was fairly long too....only ten seconds shorter than mine!
ah ok my bad, that's fair enough 😀

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« Reply #18 on: July 08, 2019, 07:32:25 PM »
This is really good! I wanted to give a couple listens before commenting.
you really do pick up more on the lyrics after another pass which are well thought
out and work very well together. The change at 2:45 is perfect, my first impression
was that maybe there should be a bridge with vocals to change it up more but i
didnt feel that as much the second time around. You really captured the mood and feel
that these strong lyrics convey. Impressive! .....Ray

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« Reply #19 on: July 14, 2019, 08:32:06 PM »
Hi,

I like your song. The voice has something, that's for sure.  The rest is simple but effective. It's well produced in style because it's not too clean and I think it's good. I like the ending in echo.  The only thing that bothered me a little bit was the appearance of the guitar on the right at 0.14'.

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« Reply #20 on: July 15, 2019, 09:37:53 AM »
Hi,

I like your song. The voice has something, that's for sure.  The rest is simple but effective. It's well produced in style because it's not too clean and I think it's good. I like the ending in echo.  The only thing that bothered me a little bit was the appearance of the guitar on the right at 0.14'.

Great work!

IS
Thank you for the feedback. It's all recorded using a bass, no conventional guitars and one of the the things I like to do is demonstrate the range of sounds I can achieve with my bass. I think the "guitar" part you are referring to is the little reverse fade in bit ? this is more just a sound effect to add a bit of texture to the song it pops up now and again throughout the song

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« Reply #21 on: July 15, 2019, 09:38:26 AM »
This is really good! I wanted to give a couple listens before commenting.
you really do pick up more on the lyrics after another pass which are well thought
out and work very well together. The change at 2:45 is perfect, my first impression
was that maybe there should be a bridge with vocals to change it up more but i
didnt feel that as much the second time around. You really captured the mood and feel
that these strong lyrics convey. Impressive! .....Ray
Thanks for the feedback Ray

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« Reply #22 on: July 15, 2019, 09:50:38 AM »
Yes, that's right, the fade in! This use of the bass is surprising and very successful.
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