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Andyb

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« Reply #15 on: June 27, 2019, 03:49:40 PM »
Really love the production on the drums. Think you are being a little too critical this is a good song and sung really really well. Movie soundtrack right there. Overall the production is very good and a really great vocal

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« Reply #16 on: July 09, 2019, 08:56:23 AM »
Wow mate, you actually wrote me a song?! That was so kind of you  ;D ;D ;D
Fab stuff as we are used to from you and as always the vox is the star of the show. Solid writing and performance but I think the mix, though not bad in any way, could be even better. Vox is a tad on top of the rest, and I think it could be "bigger" as a track like this deserves.
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« Reply #17 on: July 10, 2019, 10:15:55 AM »
Leo,

I always enjoy your tune. They sound great and your vocals are fabulous.

Ignoring the production, for me it was a solid tune rather than being memorable and maybe if it didn't connect with you it perhaps doesn't connect as well with the listener, although there were plenty of others who clearly disagree. Anyway you've done it and can move on the next one!

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« Reply #18 on: July 13, 2019, 12:26:46 PM »
Hi,
You have a very beautiful voice, when you sing something happens, that's for sure!

 If I had to criticize in all modesty, I would perhaps say that the rhythmic part is a little flat, which does not serve the progression of the song.

It's a quality job anyway!

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« Reply #19 on: July 16, 2019, 01:11:17 AM »
I love this one Leo. It's got a vulnerable, yet powerful message. I think if you wrote it all in the first person it would be even more powerful  8)   
that being said, you could be singing about dog shit and I would love it because you are blessed with an amazing voice and an ability to come
up with awesome melodies and put them together brilliantly. I can totally relate to this song, but in a different way than is meant  :P
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