Lyrics on a Classical Piece

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KamInnons

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« Reply #15 on: August 12, 2019, 05:39:50 PM »
Nice piece, good feel, and the handling of the forces was done well.


There are engraving issues however, particularly with slurs colliding with other components.

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« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2019, 10:28:47 PM »
Nice piece, good feel, and the handling of the forces was done well.


There are engraving issues however, particularly with slurs colliding with other components.

Nice to know i can control my forces...i always found Bach tricky, this was recorded a few years after i learned it, hence the engraving issues...

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« Reply #17 on: August 12, 2019, 10:29:34 PM »
Did you get anywhere with lyrics?

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« Reply #18 on: August 13, 2019, 04:07:48 AM »
I haven't yet.... I did look at it again earlier today. And listened some more. I really enjoy listening to it. I think I need to listen to it many times more. Too many projects on my list; I want to do them all....

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« Reply #19 on: August 21, 2019, 10:51:22 PM »
Wrote this as I listened to it

Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
butterflies and dandelions , butterflies and dandelions
Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
drifting slowly, drifting slowly -
otters swimming , Kingfishers diving
rabbits running , foxes cunning 

Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
butterflies and dandelions , butterflies and dandelions

otters swimming , Kingfishers diving
rabbits running , foxes cunning

and god is here and god is here
so do not fear

Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,
butterflies and dandelions , butterflies and dandelions
Along the waters edge , Along the waters edge ,






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« Reply #20 on: August 27, 2019, 03:54:16 PM »
Hi Katie

I'd be grateful if you could let me have some indication of how you imagined the words to fit the tune.

Could you maybe sing it?

Rich