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rightly:
I put this together a while ago.
it was a lot of fun.
There are no words or human voice in the track.

I'd like to continue down this sort of thing, it's unlike anything I've done before.


https://soundcloud.com/rightly/rightlys-deviation-3

shadowfax:
A strange piece..held together nicely by the ...are they Trombones?, every other bar, atmospheric and slightly eerie, found it quite hypnotic :)
great title... 8)

good work!! :)

Skub:
Yo Rightly and I hope you are!

I love the feel of this piece,like a slightly sinister 'Teddy Bear's Picnic'.  :o

There has a cinematic vibe and I can see someone with a bit of video talent making a vid to suit. Great to hear you experiment.

A cohesive track and a fine listen,you never cease to surprise!  8)

redrhodie:
Hey rightly,

I thought it sounded like a great piece for a modern tango, and if I had fulfilled my 5th grade dream of becoming a choreographer, I'd make a dance on this. Its full of movement and imagery.

Sunduta:
Unique atmosphere, tension during whole song. Listening to it creates really weird scenes in my mind :)

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