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NEW SONG - COLD

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« on: June 10, 2019, 07:53:39 PM »
Hi
This is my first song on here.

All comments gratefully received.
https://soundcloud.com/resrocks/cold
cheers

les
« Last Edit: June 11, 2019, 12:12:09 AM by nooms »

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« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2019, 10:03:46 PM »
Hi Les, welcome to the forum.  I thought it was a solid track, nice thick production... clear structure. The solo is a standout too.  I'd maybe be inclined to shave 30 seconds off it (less is more, right?) and perhaps add some backing vocals but apart from that, really good well delivered song.  Looking forward to hearing some more of your stuff mate.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2019, 04:04:21 PM »
Hi
Thanks for your comments.

You're right it could be a bit shorter. I was going to try some backing vocals, but as i don't like my voice anyway i decided to give it a miss. Maybe i'll try my next song.

Cheers

Les