Hi Jo and welcome to the forum.
As a full-blown atheist I'm probably not the best to pick my way through religious lyrcs but I'll ger her a try.
First thing to note - the chorus. From the off, it's always the most difficult to analyze lyrics that don't rhyme. It's not a no-no - I've done it myself when I can get away with it and my favourite band do it all the time - but it does make it awkward in the critique department.
When people read lyrics they don't know the actual tune to they will often force their own on them in their heads (I do at least). When it's not an obvious rhyming structure that makes it more difficult to analyze.
That said, onto the good stuff...
You've got it all,
All I need and want.
I would have switched around "need" and "want" in line 4, but that's just personal preference (you want something, you really NEED it).
You've got fame, power;
Throne, dominion and a
Miracle working name
I actually have a different take on this than Calia in that I never really had a problem with looking for a melofy. Given the lack of rhyming throughout I didn't bother to read it that way and just came upon it from a standpoint of words only.
I saw this part as actually semi-rhyming (po-wer / and a). My only point would be that I'm not sure abour "fame, power". As I said, I'm an atheist, but this doesn't seem to fit quite right with me with the image God wants to portray. It kind of paints him as someone who chases such base needs. It's not what you're trying to say (I don't think) but that's how it comes across. But you'll probably want to get a second opinion on that as I'm probably blinkered on the subject.
Verses-wise, they seem very much in the vein any number of hymns I encountered as a child.
My only real note on them is this:
8 / 9
6 / 7
6 / 7
5 / 6
7 / 9
4 / 4
That's the syllable count for each verese. Apart from the last line they're all different (I assumed 6 for line 3 of verse one, assuming you pronounce e-ver-y instead of ev-ry). One of them is two syllables different (again, I've assumed you pronounce it myst-er-ies and not myst-ries). As I don't know your melody, I can't tell how that affects things though. Just a note.
I would say it does need another verse - possibly something to round it off with a little more personal meaning.
It just feels at the moment that you're extolling God as praiseworthy but not really going beyond that into the real why (no real sense on the why with regards to you personally if that makes sense). If that's your aim to be general then feel free to ignore me here. I'm nearly thirty years distant from involving myself with this type of lyric (at least from this standpoint) so I'm way out of touch on it. :p
Overall though, it's pretty decent.