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Loneliness

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Girlinside:
Hi I’ve taken some old lyrics and I have a melody but I can’t record properly I wondered if someone would help me produce a song
Here’s my lyrics
Loneliness

 Everybody sees me
but they don't see my mind
they think that my smile is a true one
and that I'm having the time of my life

Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own

Picture a prison cell
and the deepest well
that's where your find
the seeds of loneliness

Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own

Some say "how are you ? "
Oh if only they knew
but you just smile and nod
and hope to god you'll make it through

Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own

Fades

Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own

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