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Delicious Grace - Queen Of England
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alcapone_dudu:
Hi everybody. We've got a new demo out. Hope you guys like it. It's called ''Queen Of England''.
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This song was based on a film called ‘’King Charles III’’. It seemed an interesting subject to write about.
I would like to clarify this is not a political statement. I've lived in England for a period of my life and have nothing to complain about. It’s just a fun song based on a fictional situation.
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My previous songs:
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=13844.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=15865.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=16127.0
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=16328.0
cowparsleyman:
Whato - I really like this song there’s a lot that could be done with Production on it but as it is a demo it’s fine .
Nice job, love to hear it when it’s finished
alcapone_dudu:
Lyrics: Queen Of England
You’re sitting there all day long
Don’t know where else that you’d belong
If you want something just shout it out
That’s how evetything works around
It’s hard to believe this is real
Have you ever asked how people feel?
This situation needs a change
Is intervention in the game?
chorus:
My Queen of England what happened to you?
I miss the sunshine, haven’t you?
My Queen of England what happened to you?
I miss the sunshine but don’t miss you
Stupid things sometimes we say
Though your opinion got some weight
You should line up everyone’s agenda
And it would be a soft surrender
chorus:
My Queen of England what happened to you?
I miss the sunshine, haven’t you?
My Queen of England what happened to you?
I miss the sunshine but don’t miss you
final part:
My Queen of England what happened to you?
I miss the sunshine, haven’t you?
My Queen of England what happened to you?
I miss that time... Tell me about you...
alcapone_dudu:
--- Quote from: cowparsleyman on May 18, 2019, 04:49:45 PM ---Whato - I really like this song there’s a lot that could be done with Production on it but as it is a demo it’s fine .
Nice job, love to hear it when it’s finished
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Thank you for taking the time to listen to it. I'm glad you liked it.
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