[Andreas]

Here's a brand new song, written and recorded this week! The song is basically finished, but since it is a first demo recording and not perfect, it goes in this thread as a work-in-progress A who would have known, it's a love song again :p It's about not telling a person how you feel, and as the days go by, you drift apart from each other. The moral line in the story is to tell a person that you love them before it's too late. Better to know than live with regret.


Lyrics:

Are you waiting to hear that song
Play on the radio all night long
Instead, listen to the words I sing
Sorry that it took me so long babe

The music gently flows through your ear
As you close your eyes and see me there
You wipe a tear away from your eye
I’m sorry it took so long babe

I choke on my words, I can’t speak
I don’t want you to hurt, can’t you see
One touch is all it takes a man to fall
I find it easier to lose it all
To lose it all

We talk about the movies we would see
Lovers in black and white on the screen
You’re the missing piece of my heart
You know it kills me that we’re apart

See the romantics in the street how they smile
We could be them but it’s been a while
Hope I’m not the reason for your tears
Sorry it took me so long dear

I choke on my words, I can’t speak
I don’t want you to hurt, can’t you see
One touch is all it takes a man to fall
I find it easier to lose it all
To lose it all

If I don’t have you
I have nothing left to lose
So that’s why I’m ready to
Lose it all
Lose it all

Cheers!

[Modestmouse1965/]

Hi
I dont know much about this style of music but for what its worth this is something i would love to hear sitting by a fire with couple of beers. Will check back as this progresses cheers.

Looking for a review on a couple of demos i put up also cheers

[Andreas]

Cheers mate A couple of beers around a bonfire on the beach with an acoustic guitar playing, not a bad thought! :p