I wrote this some time ago and haven't really got a quality recording of it.
I'm thinking of redoing it with cubase. If I could make some improvements on it I'd be right pleased, that might give the song a new lease of life.
Critique and suggestions are welcome.
make believe me
tell me my thoughts
where do I stand
what can you force
into a trembling hand
which way is up
what to believe
write me a book
on all that I'll need
Make believe me
Better to be fat than hungry
put me in school
turn out my lights
until I only want to see
whatever you like
give me many names
n one of two sides
tell me who's to blame
tell me who's to die
Make believe me
better to be fat than hungry
look at my painted window I
know not how to ask
broken in a fold
fixed into the glass
kneeling I'm straight
standing I'm crooked
tell me I should wait
one day I'll get lucky
Make believe me
better to be fat than hungry
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rightly
