Wrote a new lyric today, and I really feel good about this one. It sounded good the minute I started to write and put some chords and vocal melody to it, and it felt good with my voice immediately
The first two lines came fast and I already had "hopeless" in the back of my mind, so was kinda writing out from that, but as soon as I got out of my writers' block the rest of the song came quickly to me as well. Will add a bridge when I get the idea for one, but when I do I will record it and put the song out on the forum
Just wanted some thoughts on the lyrics first! Wrote it in the key of E, but with a capo on the fourth fret, so then you have an idea of where I'm going with this song
Cheers!
Hopeless(Verse 1)There’s an empty side next to me in my bed
Got the memories of you and me in my head
I’ve been wanting to tell you that you are the one
Would you say, boy what do you know about love
(Pre-Chorus)And I’m lost, that I can’t see you everyday
And I’m lost, is there any other way
(Chorus)Is it hopeless, am I stuck in my mind
Could you fall for me, should I give you time
Is it hopeless, am I lost in my head
Should I say something, to make you fall for me
Am I hopeless
(Verse 2)I could sit all night in my room and talk with you
It’s been a routine when you ask me what I do
(Chorus)Is it hopeless, am I stuck in my mind
Could you fall for me, should I give you time
Is it hopeless, am I lost in my head
Should I say something, to make you fall for me
Am I hopeless
