First song ever

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« on: May 08, 2019, 01:43:17 PM »
Hi! I'm new here! I just wrote my first song ever and really like to get some feedback on it. It is just lyrics for now.


(Verse 1)

Existing with closed eyes   

Only lasting lies

Handcuffed reading his words

Ending in burns (in burns)

You’d never commit

I am about to lose it

Standing with my broken heart

I want to restart


(Chorus)

Is this your face

Or was it just a race

Did it mean a thing

That talk about a ring

trail of hurt

(Leaving me in the dirt)

Trail of hurt


(Verse 2)

Wasn’t it clearly

That sometimes you’d fear me

Only now I figured

That no one can fix it

Trust is broken

Words unspoken

Crying in the corner

I have lost all my armour


(Chorus)

Is this your face

Or was it just a race

Did it mean a thing

That talk about a ring

trail of hurt

(Leaving me in the dirt)

Trail of hurt


(Verse 3)


Saw you as a different someone

Never hurting a loved one

Talking about the future

But now my heart needs a sewer

Shaking hands pounding heart

Maybe we should break apart



(Chorus)

Is this your face

Or was it just a race

Did it mean a thing

That talk about a ring

trail of hurt

(Leaving me in the dirt)

Trail of hurt


(Bridge)

Naive thinking and a fake feeling

Now my heart can’t stop bleeding

Never thought this could happen again

But here I am (here I am)


(Chorus)

Is this your face

Or was it just a race

Did it mean a thing

That talk about a ring

trail of hurt

(Leaving me in the dirt)

Trail of hurt