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dinnerwithgreedo

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« on: May 06, 2019, 04:36:32 PM »
Here's an old (and short) one of mine. Enjoy!


Lyrics

It blows my mind you cannot see
You're beautiful
You're such a fool
No one i've known has ever been
So beautiful
and wonderful
Remember.... it's just my opinion. It doesn't make me right. Although i probably am ;)

Andreas

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« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2019, 04:49:28 PM »
This is simply just beautiful @dinnerwithgreedo :) Beautiful lyrics and a wonferful melody! Looking forward to hear if it is coming something more from this song :)

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« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2019, 04:56:51 PM »
This made me sigh with a smile on my face and want to curl up and go to sleep. Lovely.

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« Reply #4 on: May 06, 2019, 09:18:10 PM »
 Beautiful describes beautiful.

Love the pianos and strings.

So uplifting, with hints of the Beatles.

Top song

Sandeep

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« Reply #5 on: May 09, 2019, 09:59:40 AM »
Well done that is a nice one.
Like you said, very short. You could build on it, now matter how old.
But then I know how difficult it is to do that.

Nice.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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tboswell

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« Reply #6 on: May 09, 2019, 10:10:57 AM »
Really charming stuff, innocent and gentle.

Strings sound nice, maybe would be good to shift em' a little earlier in the midi track as as they speak after the beat a little bit.

Very nice work though, less is more as you have proven to us all again!


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« Reply #7 on: May 09, 2019, 11:15:20 PM »
Lovely Beatlesy vibe, as if sung by the guy from the Flaming Lips.
I thought from the title it would be too cheesy for my cynical tastes, but it wasn’t... it stayed delicate and a bit unpredictable.
Lovely gossamer-winged stuff Greedo. Bravo.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #8 on: May 10, 2019, 06:27:50 PM »
It's a lovely track for sure.

I'd like the lyrical content to expand further,there's great potential there,as there is to take the whole thing further.

It's delightful as it is,but could be so much more.

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« Reply #9 on: May 10, 2019, 09:49:14 PM »
What a lovely song. It's just right. I love the piano / vocals combination and some lovely chord changes. Just a fabulous little song. You could expand it if you wanted to but it works as it is  :)

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« Reply #10 on: May 12, 2019, 11:44:42 AM »
Hi

That was really nice.
Sweet without sounding corny or cheesy.
Nice blend of instrumentation.

A lovely little album gem.

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« Reply #11 on: May 18, 2019, 12:26:49 PM »
Haunting... I like the shortness (would be good as the final song on an album, just finishing things off).

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« Reply #12 on: June 20, 2019, 12:25:48 PM »
I'm with Sterix on this one, great last track on an album, gentle and would sit nicely after a hell for leather rock number.

Nice simplicity, although I wouldn't put the strings in.

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« Reply #13 on: June 24, 2019, 09:29:16 AM »
Very poignant agree with all that’s been said ,