New song, demo version, contains swearing

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Younger Hills

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« on: May 06, 2019, 01:07:18 PM »
Wrote a new song last night with an easy, catchy acoustic picking pattern, about giving a little more fu*k about what others think about you, or your life or about others opinion.



Lyrics:

FU*K IT

They say I’m no good
That I’m down for a reason
And I can’t get back up
They say I’m a fool
That I’m lost in the middle
And I’m not good enough

I just say fuck it
I will never give up
I say fuck it
I will always be enough
I say fuck it
Can you please just shut up
I say fuck it
Fuck it
I’m just a little lost

They say I don’t settle
That you don’t should expect
That I put a ring on your finger
I just got lost, in the middle of the night
I lost the fight
Now I got victory in my sight

If you hear me calling, you hear me calling
Then I’m falling, I’m falling(x2)
Where the Hills are young, the Souls are old

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Dogmax

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« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2019, 08:52:22 PM »
There are certain parts of this i like but im thinking maybe you're misusing the f word, it sound comes across like a negative so maybe instead of 'I just say fuck it' try 'I say bull fucking shite' 

RealKevM

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« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2019, 12:20:07 AM »
Great guitar, some decent lyrics too, especially in the first verse.

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« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2019, 11:59:44 AM »
@RealKevM @Dogmax thanks, guys! :) It is kinda my rebel song to something we have here in Norway called "Janteloven" or in English "Law of Jante", about that we should never give in to what others say or mean. The use of the word fu*k could possibly be used differently.
Where the Hills are young, the Souls are old

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