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The Thrill of The Fall- original song by Molly Mcvey !

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mollymc98:
Hiya everyone I’m new to this site still trying to get to grips with working things! This is one of my newest songs recorded in my bedroom I’m still learning so I hope use enjoy let me know what you think!

Thank you

Molly

https://soundcloud.com/mollymcveymusic/the-thrill-of-the-fall-original-song-by-molly-mcvey




Verse 1

Lost myself trying to save everybody else but it was
Me who needed saving
Now their so high and I’m down
Here lying flat out on the pavement

Pre
But where’s the hand that I’m supposed to hold to get me up
I’ve been searching for the answers time and time again but still I’ve had no luck

Chorus
Left alone with no one at all
Relapse back now I’m trapped
In the thrill of the fall
And I’m down without a way back up
Surrender to the dark now I’m stuck
Now I’m stuck

Verse 2
I’m overthinking in the early hours that should be used for sleeping
Hard to rest when the devils on your shoulder and your running from your demons

Pre
But where’s the hand that I’m supposed to hold to get me up
I’ve been searching for the answers time and time again but still I’ve had no luck

Chorus x2
Left alone with no one at all
Relapse back now I’m trapped
In the thrill of the fall
And I’m down without a way back up
Surrender to the dark now I’m stuck
Now I’m stuck now I’m stuck

Dogmax:
You forgot one thing post your lyrics, welcome 8)

rightly:
Intriguing title Molly.
Please post the lyrics, it's my preferred way to enjoy a song.
I'll have a listen now. 
And welcome to the forum.

rightly:
Ok. Really lovely song.
Pretty minimal production, I like that.
Sexy voice, it brought Fiona Apple to mind.
Thanks for sharing.

Dogmax:

--- Quote from: mollymc98 on May 03, 2019, 12:24:14 AM ---Hiya everyone I’m new to this site still trying to get to grips with working things! This is one of my newest songs recorded in my bedroom I’m still learning so I hope use enjoy let me know what you think!

Thank you

Molly

https://soundcloud.com/mollymcveymusic/the-thrill-of-the-fall-original-song-by-molly-mcvey




Verse 1

Lost myself trying to save everybody else but it was
Me who needed saving
Now their so high and I’m down
Here lying flat out on the pavement

Pre
But where’s the hand that I’m supposed to hold to get me up
I’ve been searching for the answers time and time again but still I’ve had no luck

Chorus
Left alone with no one at all
Relapse back now I’m trapped
In the thrill of the fall
And I’m down without a way back up
Surrender to the dark now I’m stuck
Now I’m stuck

Verse 2
I’m overthinking in the early hours that should be used for sleeping
Hard to rest when the devils on your shoulder and your running from your demons

Pre
But where’s the hand that I’m supposed to hold to get me up
I’ve been searching for the answers time and time again but still I’ve had no luck

Chorus x2
Left alone with no one at all
Relapse back now I’m trapped
In the thrill of the fall
And I’m down without a way back up
Surrender to the dark now I’m stuck
Now I’m stuck now I’m stuck


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Great to hear lyrics been sung as they should be i say wow, there's an old fashion style there where did you get that from   8)

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