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Walking Carbohydrate (Spring Quest entry) (mildy sweary in places)

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« Reply #15 on: April 29, 2019, 03:18:51 PM »
Very entertaining Adam! Smart lyrics and very quirky instrumentation that's full of surprises. Crazy backing vocal, love it!

Good singalong chorus too. Mucho fun, good stuff! :)
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« Reply #16 on: May 02, 2019, 08:49:15 PM »
Yo Adam.

This is a cleverly done piece,I also hear the Billy Bragg vibe.

A genre all of your own and a very original song.

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« Reply #17 on: May 03, 2019, 11:39:22 AM »
This was a surprise.
Really funny.

You're so cross, you're gonna cause a crusade.

Another great write from you Adam. Nice one.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

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« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2019, 11:53:43 AM »
Hi Adam,


Love the sentiment behind the lyrics.
What sells it is the delivery of the vocal. Great gusto.
The styles are all over the place and make for a fun and interesting song - even if it is really planted in such serious territory.

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« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2019, 05:41:03 PM »
It's all about the lyrics here, I think, and you've done a great job. The raw, acoustic feel suits it and though my taste is for a more full-on sound, that would spoil this one. Very quirky.