Our Last Goodbye

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pnb99

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« on: April 22, 2019, 10:25:51 AM »
Our Last Goodbye - 74BPM

A song about making difficult decisions.....



Verse 1
Iʼve got a feeling tonight
Itʼs time to make up my mind But I donʼt want to....
I donʼt want to leave

Verse 2
All things must come to an end
this hourglass has no sand And so I have to.....
Yes I have to go

Chorus 1
Iʼm alone with you
Iʼm caught up in the cold This is the saddest day This is our last goodbye
Thereʼs no more left to win And nothing left to lose
This is the saddest day This is our last goodbye

Verse 3
I see you all at one time Iʼm just a thorn in your side
Yet how I want you, how I need you so

Chorus 2
I donʼt want to lie as shadows turn to night
this is the saddest day, this is our last goodbye
Weʼve no more left to say, Your heart has gone away
This is the saddest day, this is our last goodbye

Chorus 3
Iʼm alone with you ,Just caught up in the cold
This is the the saddest day, this is our last goodbye
I loved you to the end, and love is all I have
This is the saddest day This is our last goodbye

PaulyX

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« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2019, 10:05:03 AM »
Hi! I liked this... it was nothing like I expected it to be from reading the lyrics. The restrained start gave it a brooding quality but you really build it well. Interesting chorus melody which is nice and distinct from the verses, and the BVs / lead combination towards the end is a thing of beauty. Great singing and production... not much I’d tweak at all. Impressive stuff. Get stuck in and review some others and I’m sure you’ll get more feedback.
It's all too beautiful.

cowparsleyman

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« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2019, 10:11:57 AM »
Hi Paul, nice to have you back again...You always did some classy stuff...

Listening as I write, Love the LVox prod, space for the drums, a lot of work in this...although it does grab me as some songs, I know this is a grower, one that takes it's time, always the best.

Great HVox arrangement, perfect prod of that submix.

Convincing strings, Kick drum a little quiet, but overall a superb piece of Work.

Love it.