[pkyl]

Hello, I would like to share with you my song and I wish to read your opinions about it(singing, guitar playing, lead part etc.). Thank You


https://instaud.io/3zYI

[t.wretborn]

Hello!

Good work!
There is a change of tempo between the intro and song (maybe on purpose)
The guitar plucking intro is good. The singing is very soft and mellow so i would sugest a diffrent guitar playing there to meet that. Now the two dont match so well. Maybe plucking there would sound nice!

Keep it up!

[PaulyX]

Hi!
I liked the solos around the 1 minute and 2 minute mark. Spanish flavour to them. And I liked the intro.
I would say the main thing to work on is vocal melody ( not your voice or singing, which is fine ... more that the melody feels like it just follows the chords mostly - you could get more ambitious with that melody maybe?)
Nice track though, welcome to the Forum.
Pauly