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Wind and Sea
igg:
Hi.... Any thoughts or suggestions?????
igg
Wind and Sea
Verse 1:
The wind whipped silver water
Blows whitecaps fringed with spray
He whispered, "I'm so mighty
I'll rage and have my way"
And Water said "don't tease me, boy
With fingers through my hair
My body vast as heaven's reach
Can feel your surging air
Verse 2:
"I travel where I wish", he cried
"Not bound by any shore
And as we move together
We'll tangle more and more"
She said, "Let's dash against the rocks
And join in rising mist
As our two bodies turn to foam
We'll show how we have kissed"
Chorus:
Let lightning be our witness
The sparkling stars our guests
We're surging with the power
Of lover's truly blessed
To some we're just the weather
A rainy afternoon
But we have found the secret love
Between the sun and moon
Verse 3:
And from this union will ascend
Our clouds fulfilled with rain
And they will travel 'round the world
Before they fall again
Our hearts will pound and thunder
Through every distant shore
As we are joined as one at last
Held fast forevermore
Chorus:
Let lightning be our witness
The sparkling stars our guests
We're surging with the power
Of lover's truly blessed
To some we're just the weather
A rainy afternoon
But we have found the secret love
Between the sun and moon
Andreas:
Clever using ABCB rhyming, and you're going with the same pattern throughout the whole song. It works very well, and the lyrics are beautiful and touching. Not like the typical love songs, but you have a really cool and storytelling writing style. Can't wait to hear some music to these amazing lyrics :)
Andreas
Dogmax:
--- Quote from: igg on April 19, 2019, 04:54:25 PM ---Hi.... Any thoughts or suggestions?????
igg
Wind and Sea
Verse 1:
The wind whipped silver water
Blows whitecaps fringed with spray
He whispered, "I'm so mighty
I'll rage and have my way"
And Water said "don't tease me, boy
With fingers through my hair
My body vast as heaven's reach
Can feel your surging air
Verse 2:
"I travel where I wish", he cried
"Not bound by any shore
And as we move together
We'll tangle more and more"
She said, "Let's dash against the rocks
And join in rising mist
As our two bodies turn to foam
We'll show how we have kissed"
Chorus:
Let lightning be our witness
The sparkling stars our guests
We're surging with the power
Of lover's truly blessed
To some we're just the weather
A rainy afternoon
But we have found the secret love
Between the sun and moon
Verse 3:
And from this union will ascend
Our clouds fulfilled with rain
And they will travel 'round the world
Before they fall again
Our hearts will pound and thunder
Through every distant shore
As we are joined as one at last
Held fast forevermore
Chorus:
Let lightning be our witness
The sparkling stars our guests
We're surging with the power
Of lover's truly blessed
To some we're just the weather
A rainy afternoon
But we have found the secret love
Between the sun and moon
--- End quote ---
Hey man reality ask 'did they make it to the beach' 'did they make it to the sea'
Neil C:
Igg,
Just got to say fabulous lyrics, nothing to add.
Indeed I wish I'd written it..
Cant wait to hear it put to music.
:-)
Neil
igg:
Hi guys!...
Thanks for taking the time to comment and such kind comments they were..
Younger Hills - Thanks...Glad you liked the lyrics....currently working on the music....
Dogmax - They make it everywhere...all the time...!
Neil - Good to see again!!!!!....been awhile...Thank you sincerely for the heartfelt comments...
igg
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