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Robotic Wedding (collaborative effort)
Sterix:
So, @pompeyjazz came up with a tune to which myself and @ScottLevi added lyrics/vocals. The result was this:
ROBOTIC WEDDING
Feel my heart
Made out of spare parts
You make it spark
Light up in the dark
Feed the power
The future is ours
Take hold my hand
And slow down the sands
Time
Standing still now
I'm
Feeling chills now
You take my breath as you glide down the aisle
I will, you said, with your wide-open smile
Metal ascending
The old world is ending
The system's resetting
Rebooting, ejecting
Yes, metal ascending
The old world is ending
The new world attending
Our robotic wedding
Two robots programmed to need more than code
Stretching beyond any dreams they behold
Spoken vows
Our joining pronounced
The silicone crowd
All gather around
I take your hand
With programmed commands
We take to the floor
For the first dance and now you're
Mine
Such a thrill now
I'm
So fulfilled now
Who would have thought we would share all our files?
Zeroes and ones made to care for a while
Metal ascending
The old world is ending
The system's resetting
Rebooting, ejecting
Yes, metal ascending
The old world is ending
The new world attending
Our robotic wedding
Two robots met and they fell deep in love
Programmed to need wedding bells... oh oh oh
mickyplankton:
This is great! The lyrics are very clever. Subversive, thought provoking and charming/disturbing in equal measure. Perfect for the music which is an infectious blend of late period Fall and Kraftwork.
The whole is greater than the sum of the parts which is what you want from a Collab right? Very much enjoyed
rightly:
Yeah this is so much fun!
Scottlevi is da man for vocals.
Lyrics and music work really well. I'm surprised at how quickly!
I guess it's probably been done already but I've always thought "spare parts" would be a good name for a band.
Well done gentlemen!
nooms:
fine collab you chaps..
moves along lovely
lyric and character voices really well done
some neat touches going on in that groove
wedding march on the end takes the cake
Skub:
Yo you lot.
It's like a cross between Gary Numan and Kraftwerk. Great collab. :)
Runs like clockwork. 8)
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