Hi,
OK, some negatives from me - it sounds over processed but I like everything as natural as possible so that's just my taste, the vocals are a little indistinct maybe due to the effect you've got on there, I'm mot getting a lot of melody which is what I look for first. On a more positive note, I liked the lyrics and there are plenty of great production ideas going on. Not really my cup of tea but I try to not only comment on things I like.
M
