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Lazy Weekend

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MartynRich:
A silly blues song for a silly mood...I left in the end to get across just how lazy I was feeling playing this...lyrics at the link

https://soundcloud.com/martynrich/lazy-weekend

pompeyjazz:
Like the studio shot Martyn  ;D I thought this was an absolutely great lazy vibe. The rhythm guitar is inspired. Everything seems to work so well together. I love the crazy geetar as well, gotta have some crazy guitar  ;D Listened to this a few times now and it gets better every listen.

Another cracker man  :)

adamfarr:
Superb guitar work here, you’ve got them sounding amazing. Vocals a bit boomy / bassy for me (could be a question of eq’ing the reverb a bit?). Yeah, but not on a lazy Sunday...  :)


Great theme (obviously no kids yet then!)


I’ll excuse your Spanish at the end  :D

rightly:
This is ringing with potential.
Still I think it's way off finished. 

Guitar is very nice and the feel of it works too.

Some ideas here. 

MartynRich:
@pompeyjazz - a true gent
@adamfarr  I´ve got two kids actually, this song is just wishful thinking. As for the reverb, that´s what you get when you mixed in headphones. I´ve uploaded a new version that should sound better.
@Rightly - Please don´t be shy, tell my why you don´t think it´s finished. I´d love to hear your ideas. Thanks for the listen and feedback!

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