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Jason and the Aga nooms / neil connor collab

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nooms:
heres a new song from neil and i..
a lounge ballad .! ?
i was surprised too when it arrived ..

neils on all the wires, saucepans and some rather marvellous joanna
and ive added words and vocals
any comments welcome
hope you enjoy

https://soundcloud.com/nooms-1/jason-and-the-aga-nooms-connor/s-41cUI

JASON AND THE AGA    2019 

i got the message, it wasnt much,
a blistered text and a jpeg of a casserole   
i suggested paracetamol
was out of order but what the hell

i got the message, well, the one  between the lines
cos it read smiley, positive and brief ,
but underneath there was, 
jason in the punctuation and..
who’s that ?
who’s that ?
no clues in the flames, where all our movies our born
tonight i stare at the fire, poke it around but
next to useless
cos im not getting warm
i understand bout as much as i can
i understand bout as much as i can

what is spoken and what is heard
aint necessarily the same bird thats circling
i am torn
feets to the fire but i aint getting warm

i understand bout as much as i can
i understand bout as much as i can
no clues in the flames
that i can form
feets to the fire
but im not getting warm
whose that ?
whose that ?
she said its jason from the aga store

shadowfax:
Clever title and clever lyrics...perfect song for Lena Horne, very cool vocals and a gold medal to the pianist..
really atmospheric song guys..it totally works :)

Neil C:
Hi, whilst I do play the piano I have to state it’s Ezykeys which I arranged.
 :-)
Neil

MartynRich:
What a huge smile this brought to my face. I love this style of songwriting and it´s got great lyrics. It´s all so clever - chords, instrumentation, arrangement, mix, vocals...I´m voting it as one of the SOTM even before it´s nominated. It must be, no?

shadowfax:

--- Quote from: Neil C on March 24, 2019, 12:13:38 PM ---Hi, whilst I do play the piano I have to state it’s Ezykeys which I arranged.
 :-)
Neil


--- End quote ---

well, beautifully arranged Neil mate..

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