What Butterflies Can Do

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« Reply #15 on: April 19, 2019, 11:31:18 AM »
Hi,

This is a beautiful, simple, elegant love song. Lovely guitar and strings, super melody and a sweet vocal. Maybe a little more weight to the vocal would improve it but other than that, a gem of a song.

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« Reply #16 on: April 19, 2019, 12:57:17 PM »
Great strings in the song.

Lovely melody and heartfelt.

A enjoyable and warming listen

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« Reply #17 on: April 19, 2019, 04:29:32 PM »
Thanks Sandeep

@montydog I understand what you mean about the vocal. I chose to leave it that way though as i wanted it to sound like i just picked up the guitar and was singing it (to the woman it's about). It's supposed to sound kinda nervous. But maybe i should just re-record it.
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« Reply #18 on: April 19, 2019, 04:39:56 PM »
Blimey
What a sweet voice you have!.

lovely choice of instruments.
quite simple and effortlessly gets to the point.

I can't suggest any changes in the production.
keeping it simple was the best choice. Very effective.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

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