A gem of a song.
I like love songs until they go all pink n semi-flop on me. Lol.
Some, or most love songs begin and end that way.
Reminds me of a folky Dylan and there's still punk in it.
(I remember when I was eight. I was challenged to a fight, it was strange, I was all in.
It was said that I don't like music, at the time I wasn't aware of any musical preferences I might have had. I said, "I like Punk music!"
The older dude said I didn't know any punk bands. "Yes, I do. The sex pistols!".
At this point he caved a bit, I felt confused but also like I'd somehow got the upper hand.
From there the series of events became even less spectacular. It might have been '77.)
I've been listening to Joe strummer n Johnny rotten lately
So you haven't earned the sell-out label yet. The punk is still in the voice.
Do keep working on the song. At only two minutes, it's a bit short. But err...
I hope to hear it finished.