Dear Songwriter forum members,
I just made an account and this is my first post! I need your help with the second verse of my tune. I am not a native speaker and I am unsure about this verse regarding its grammar:
"Tonight I'll be haunted by this dream
where I'll be catching the sparks
(that are?) flying from your heels"
Two things come up to my mind: 1. Can I leave "that are" out? Then it would fit better the number of syllables of the melody.
2. Is the use of those particular future forms correct or do I need to use different tense?
I would highly appreciate if a native speaker can help me out. Thank you in advance.
Best,
Fadow