HI, this is a song I wrote about a year and a half ago it's the first song I wrote after deciding to write again after several years. It's fairly simple I guess (three chords throughout) i'd love to hear what you think of the song and specifically some feedback on the melody and how it could be improved (vocals are not my strong point as we all know lol)
Lyrics
The Sunflowers are dead
But you're still in my head
Your shoes are at the door
But you don't come here anymore
Chorus
You're skipping this town
Feet ain't touching the ground
Don't stop and look around
You're lost and you're found
Second verse
I packed up all my things
Took my hopes, my plans my dreams
I won't ever take your call
Won't go chasing waterfalls
The chorus changes each time from 'You're' to 'I'm' to finally 'we're' - I think I need a third verse for the final chorus starting 'We're skipping this town..' to make sense.