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Just an idea "The waltz song"
Dogmax:
At the moment just an idea a mix of "The Big Country" and Custer's Last Stand the night before and a few others, it has an American south theme to it, at the moment I just can't seem to get past the first verse, damn damn I say 8)
Oh my darling take my hand
On the dance floor we'll dance
One step two step
To the tune of the waltz
Misanthropist:
sorry darling it's foxtrot
I was talking tommyrot
one step two step and a glance
one step and a pecking chance?
Dogmax:
Strange but I was thinking of a spoken American southern accent for the first verse in a male chauvinistic style, thank you I'm starting to picture the scene again although I'm worry the lady might slap me across me face ::)
I do say I do like your style, I'm busy for the next few days so if you can get yourself a new lyric out of this idea then go for it 8)
Misanthropist:
Your approach is fine I was just creating a pugilistic atmosphere in other words being an idiot
Oh my darling I deserve your slap
Won't your chill out here's my lap
One step two step sit and behave
One step argh you reek of after shave
Dogmax:
Southern accent i'm thinking maybe val kilmer tombstone second verse you got a thirst 8)
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