lyrics "come find me"

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« on: February 19, 2019, 12:59:51 AM »
Come Find Me


VERSE ONE

I could hardly breathe
When you walked into the room
Quickly I fell deep
my eyes lit up like the moon
Did you know what you did to me
Had me stunned beyond belief
When i close my eyes and dream
You’re all that i can see
From then on You had me

CHORUS

I’m looking out Asking around
I wonder where you might be
take to the floor i dance some more
Knowing you’ll come find me
At first glance the music drowned
And you were all that i could see
These butterflies bounced around
I don't think they’ll go to sleep
You’ve turned my world
Upside down
Got my heart skipping a beat
You’ve messed me up so perfectly

Verse Two

A kiss that was sure to kill
The connecting electric i was shaking with chills
Your touch takes me to new highs
I got so lost inside your eyes
In you  found my own piece of paradise
And i’ll stay here as time flies by,
You must be an angel
From above the sky,
I’m in heaven
You’ve got me  floating on cloud nine.
Bridge

So will you come and find me
I’m right here where i’ll always be
Once you come and find me
Then baby i won’t ever leave

CHORUS

I’m looking out Asking around
I wonder where you might be
take to the floor i dance some more
Knowing you’ll come find me
At first glance the music drowned
And you were all that i could see
These butterflies bounced around
I don't think they’ll go to sleep
You’ve turned my world
Upside down
Got my heart skipping a beat
You’ve messed me up so perfectly

Verse Three

I’m still waiting right here
To see your face again
Just want you close and near to me
Never thought I would feel this way
Thinking of you everyday
Tell me do you feel the same
I’m just hoping you’ll stay
I don’t wanna seem cliche
But I know that i’ll never be the same.

CHORUS

I’m looking out Asking around
I wonder where you might be
take to the floor i dance some more
Knowing you’ll come find me
At first glance the music drowned
And you were all that i could see
These butterflies bounced around
I don't think they’ll go to sleep
You’ve turned my world
Upside down
Got my heart skipping a beat
You’ve messed me up so perfectly.








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Dogmax

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« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2019, 11:06:47 PM »
Have to ask do you have a medley for this

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« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2019, 02:50:08 PM »
My favorite line:
You've messed me up so perfectly

FAIR WARNING
I'm very difficult to please when it comes to lyrics. I see a lot of room for improvement here. I won't go super in depth because I'm typing on a phone, which I find laborious and slow. And I can't dictate instead of typing. Too many people talking around me.

The first three lines may be a bit predictable, but I still like them as they are. I find the 4th line too "weak", for want of a better word. I might say something like "And my heart began to bloom".

The next two lines I would probably change a little. Maybe something like...

What was it that you did to me?
I am stunned beyond belief.

The next two lines I like. And I would change the last line of the first verse to something like "From that moment you had me". Kind of predictable but I think it flows better. There is most likely something better than that, too.

That's all I have energy for at the moment. Plus I don't want to get too carried away as you may not care for my suggestions so I wouldn't want to burden you with a super lengthy version of them.

If you like anything here, feel free to use it. If not just ignore it.

Best wishes for your efforts with this song. I hope I get a chance to hear the final product.

Vicki