On My Mind

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« on: February 12, 2019, 11:35:40 PM »
It's hard to move on from someone you once loved, but in hindsight they probably weren't the best for you. But because they've left our lives it doesn't mean they've left our thoughts.

On My Mind

Were we doomed from the start?
Should've used my head over heart
You like to point the finger
Scream that I pulled the trigger

It was hell that you put me through
I ache
As I watch myself come back to you

Why are you constantly on my mind
Even though,
I'm the one you left behind
I guess just maybe
To the truth I was blind
As to my loving heart you were unkind
And now,
Another love you try to find
As I try to get my life realigned

I've played the role of the broken-hearted
We were done before the party even started
I've been hurt too many times by you
So now I remain guarded

And still you find your wicked ways
To draw me in, with the words you say
To your hands, I was nothing but clay

Why are you constantly on my mind
Even though,
I'm the one you left behind
I guess just maybe
To the truth I was blind
As to my loving heart you were unkind
And now,
Another love you try to find
As I try to get my life realigned

Now you're gone, I feel so suffocated
I try to be strong, but I feel so isolated
But I know the thought of you
Will soon be faded

Why are you constantly on my mind
Even though,
I'm the one you left behind
I guess just maybe
To the truth I was blind
As to my loving heart you were unkind
And now,
Another love you try to find
As I try to get my life realigned

Dogmax

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« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2019, 02:06:10 AM »
First of all on my reading your best lines is 'It's hard to move on from someone you once loved, but in hindsight they probably weren't the best for you. But because they've left our lives it doesn't mean they've left our thoughts'

What i'm saying your intro reads connected more so than your lyrics  8) adele

You got a melody flow for your lyrics  8)