What a feeling

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RAVANPREET KAUR

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« on: February 09, 2019, 11:13:29 AM »
I re-recorded this song that I wrote. Please give me reviews.

https://soundcloud.com/user-823205343-239798303/what-a-feeling

dinnerwithgreedo

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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2019, 10:12:13 PM »
I really like the composition.
It does sound like your shouting though. Maybe try singing quieter (let the mic do the work) and that may help you reach some of the notes you're going for.
Or just drop the key  ;)
Remember.... it's just my opinion. It doesn't make me right. Although i probably am ;)

Mutrins

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« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2019, 10:33:48 AM »
I like the lyrics and concept, but I do agree that you should sing it in a lower key. It seems to be a bit high for you.

Would love to hear what it sounds like in a lower key!


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« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2019, 11:42:00 PM »
Hi, yep I agree with the other reviews here... sounds like a good powerful song that could be a real celebration, but you’re probably working your voice too hard on it -too high and too shouty. Take it down a couple of semitones and relax into the delivery, maybe even slow it down a bit. Could be a great track.
It's all too beautiful.