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Punch & Judy Show
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MichaelA
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Re: Punch & Judy Show
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Reply #15 on:
February 18, 2019, 12:15:38 PM »
Hi
@crystalsuzy
! Thanks for this, but I never really thought that Punch & Judy might not be famous all around the world! That'll teach me, but glad you looked it up!
Glas you enjoyed it too.
Thanks
@mickyplankton
, nice one. All the instruments are done on synth. I recorded this one just on my ipad and some of the synths are simply tweaked defaults within Garageband. On top of this I used a synth app called Synthmaster Player. I have to admit I am pretty basic on the recording and production front!
Cheers for that appreciation too
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adamfarr
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February 18, 2019, 05:09:54 PM »
Love it. Just funny enough and just serious enough. A little Peter Gabriel in the vocal I'd say too.
Great song, brilliantly realised. Again. Marvelous stuff.
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MichaelA
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February 20, 2019, 01:11:07 PM »
Hi thanks Adam
@adamfarr
, that's very kind of you. I wish I could really sing like Peter Gabriel though. But I am quite OK with flattery too!
Ta very much!
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PaulyX
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February 20, 2019, 10:33:39 PM »
Yeah that was cool, a warped fairground ride of a song. Clever clever observational lyrics, very well executed and grin inducing. It is weird (and funny) how violent childrens entertainment can be, eh? And nursery rhymes too. I mean, take "3 Blind Mice". They're already blind... and then they get their tails cut off! And the "rock-a-bye-baby" falls out the tree to almost certain doom. Horrific... no wonder we all grow up traumatised.
Bravo on a great track.
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MartynRich
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February 21, 2019, 09:07:18 PM »
Oh, poor old Mr Punch, such an outsider in the modern world
I loved this, it's great fun from start to finish and the lyrics are great. I laughed out loud at the "I can't smack her round the head" line. Really nice production that suits the song - all very well put together. Luvvly.
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MichaelA
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February 23, 2019, 02:27:34 PM »
Thanks for that
@PaulyX
. I think you are onto a whole new song topic there, ie the darkness in nursery rhymes too! I think it's all good preparation for a tough world myself, but like Mr Punch I am probably a dinosaur!
Cheers also
@MartynRich
, some of the best songs, books and movies are about outsiders after all, so maybe explains why Mr Punch still gets by!
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March 19, 2019, 12:18:16 PM »
Wow,
What a witty, clever and funny song. Brilliant musical setting and arrangement. Great subject and some lovely lines/rhymes. Loved the way you managed to rhyme crocodile disinfected. Original and full of wonder.
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