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Its just a song ( what's been going on? )
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Its just a song ( what's been going on? )
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MartynRich
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March 03, 2019, 12:53:58 PM »
Lush guitar arrangements over a very catchy chorus here Neil...very nice. I see a bit more inventiveness in your melodic vocals over the chord structure here. The song also builds nicely up as it goes through...very pleasing to the ear. Nice topic as well...thanks for posting!
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March 04, 2019, 04:49:28 PM »
Hi Neil,
This is a strong piece of writing - very reminiscent of Ray Davies. Clever lyrics, beautiful playing and arrangement complimented by a good, strong melody. Standard is going up all the time.
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