Don't let them see you cry

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« Reply #15 on: March 09, 2019, 12:15:20 PM »
Great intro! Very atmospheric throughout
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« Reply #16 on: March 10, 2019, 09:09:21 AM »
Love the very moody start and as usual your lyrics are to die for..thought your vocal was a bit far away in the mix but maybe that was intentional..
love the arrangement..difficult to pick the words out which is a pity IMHO...but your delivery is perfect for the song.. :)

Thanks shadowfax. Yes the vocals are a bit too distant.
I'm struggling with mixing vocals. I've a newish mic n already I'm looking for another which promises to solve some problems. 
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« Reply #17 on: March 15, 2019, 12:30:14 PM »
"there will be casualties on both sides" - this came up on my Soundcloud today and that line really stayed with me. Though it my be rooted in a painful place, I did appreciate the personal nature of this one, which makes it one of my favourites of yours. It feels very direct and coherent to me without any extraneous ideas - very effective and powerful.