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Memories . (collab. Cazrolina and Flossie)

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Binladeda:

 Hello one and all  ;D ;D

 Here's another one that should have been posted months ago, but the gods had other plans ;D
 
 Most of the work was done by @Cazrolina ....vocals, bass, drums
 @flossie wrote the piano track, and I put together the lyrics..
 Also BIG thanks to @Skub for production, and @cowparsleyman for his creative input and advice

 There's been a lot of debate around songcraft/repetition/dynamics etc etc, but in the end I've decided
 it is what it is ;D .  I love it, and if I'm in the right mood....it brings a tear to my eye :-[ ::)

 Anyway, it will be interesting to hear what everyone thinks........thanks in advance for taking the time
 to listen and comment.  ;D

 https://soundcloud.com/binladeda/memories-caz-flossie-collab

  You never said I'm leaving
  You never said goodbye
  You were gone before I knew it
  Only you knew why

  A million times I needed you
  Countless times I cried
  If love alone would have stopped you
  You never would have gone

  But I wont stand by and cry
  For all those things we thought we were
  But you're there when I close my eyes
  Everything endures

  And you're still with me (I still love you)
  But things aren't as they appear
  Things aren't as they appear
  My whole world has changed
  And only memories ease the pain

  A friend, a laugh, a kiss
  All these things I'll miss
  All these things I'll miss so much
  The comfort of a loved ones touch

  You were always a heartache, a silent tear
  And now these things are precious
  A memory of when you were here

  But things aren't as they appear
  Things aren't as they appear
  And only memories ease the pain
  I remember moments we shared

  You are gone now
  But one thing remains
  Here in my heart
  A smile in my day

  No matter where you'll be
  You'll have me in your memory
  And telling other lovers
  You'll think of me

  I can't let you go
  You're still with me
  I still love you
  Love you

  Well there 'tis folks.  Hope you enjoy the journey ;D ;D

Mikey:
@Binladeda

Hi Bin, lovely song with nice piano, I'm afraid the bass and drums didn't seem to fit with the rest to me, but @Cazrolina has done her usual stunning job on the vocals.

Cheers, Mikey

cowparsleyman:
@Binladeda - Really lovely song Steve, another sublime piece, must have been an ordeal for you...

Good to hear the final cut, do love Flossie and Caz's contributions

Rich

MonnoDB:
What a beautiful voice @Cazrolina has - it’s lovely song and the lyrics are heart wrenching and emotionally delivered. Bass was a bit loud for me - I’m no expert and am listening on apple buds.

I can see how this one would bring a tear to your eye! It really is lovely.

Movin Flavour:
Beautiful song.

... Never know whats coming round the corner with your songs....only the talent level stays the same.

Great pianos, I like the contrast with the bass., gives the song a bit of depth and a kind of live feeling.

Cool and sentimental lyrics... a

Amazing vocals.

Top tune


Sandeep

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