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« Reply #15 on: February 01, 2019, 02:36:30 PM »
Really like this one  .... love the way the verse builds into the chorus. I am sure you could improve with more production, but this is basically a really strong song. And love the drawn out ending, nice touch! Well done,

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« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2019, 05:24:42 PM »
This works a treat for sure. Solid song.  Production wise I think the vocals should come up a bit in the mix, a bit buried as is. Both the guitar and the vocals sound a little "dull", some eq would help to lift the blanket off them. Good stuff :-)
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