'Lopsided Love'

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RealKevM

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« Reply #15 on: January 06, 2019, 02:52:43 PM »
Creative lyrics that are simply amazing.

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« Reply #16 on: January 08, 2019, 06:32:46 AM »
Very, very good songwriting here. Well sung great instrumentation and cracker lyrics. Love it as it is. Nothing to criticise.
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« Reply #17 on: January 08, 2019, 11:18:00 AM »
Really good listen, melodic and thoughtful. Nice to hear love songs with some of the real complexity of real life in them.
Lots of nice details in the lyrics.
Great stuff!

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« Reply #18 on: January 08, 2019, 04:59:10 PM »
I really enjoyed this. Its lovely

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« Reply #19 on: January 09, 2019, 12:38:10 PM »
@MichaelA - Good work Michael, I really loved the lyrics, really creative work. production sounds good to me.

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« Reply #20 on: January 10, 2019, 12:47:20 PM »
Thanks to all who commented, much appreciated.

@adamfarr, well yes the super-glue thing is very big in our house from time to time. There's no need to glue the entire novel, just the last page so it cannot be read!  ;D Thanks for stopping by!

@mikek  , glad you liked it! Thanks.


@RealKevM , @fischermans , @tboswell and @cowparsleyman , thanks and glad you all appreciated the lyrics. Good ideas do not necessarily come easy, but this one was easy to write once I got into it, which made me think it could be one of my better lyrical offereings! Cheers!


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« Reply #21 on: January 10, 2019, 03:16:45 PM »
Hi Michael,

Extraordinary lyrics which are so unconventional and witty. I love the arch sarcasm and dry sense of humour of your writing which is matched by the almost disdainful way you deliver the lyrics. Some lovely, clever touches which are unexpected and maintain interest throughout. Mature and adult themes dealt with via a light touch - not an easy thing to pull off.

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