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Would you hate me if I told you lies ?

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« on: December 31, 2018, 09:51:17 AM »
Hi there’s not really a story here it’s just self explanatory I think


Would you hate me if I told you lies ?

There are things that aren’t important
in the cold light of day
things we wished we’d never said
things we wished we could take back
without a delay

chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies

most of you out there know
where I’m coming from
all the things we’ve done
that we know are wrong

chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies

Would you rather
I spared you the hurt and pain ?
or let you see my sun and rain

chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies

there are things that aren’t important
in the cold light of day
things that only get in the way

chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies

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La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la










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« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2019, 10:10:55 AM »
Hello and welcome  :)

a pretty good set of lyrics which sound like they'd be an easy fit for a song.

Do you have some music on the go for them? Or are you chiefly a lyricist?

You could maybe post a little about yourself so we know a bit about who you are and what you're looking for?

Maybe it could do with a couple of extra la's at the end?  8)
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« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2019, 12:46:30 AM »
Hi thanks I write lyrics - If anyone wants to use them they can