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New Song - RomanTrix from KER Music 2018

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Krysoe

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« on: December 20, 2018, 01:40:00 PM »
Dear Friends - close to end og my 2 Years project with the scope to write, compose and record a new song each month in my little homestudio at the beach south of Copenhagen.
I know volume is not = to quality and volume cant be driver for creativity but anyway, here is my December song 2018: ROMANTRIX. ::heart::

I will apprisiate your feedback on the song in overall, quality of text, music and the recording

https://soundcloud.com/klaus-rysoe/romantrix

Wish you a Merry Christmas and a lot of good inspiration in 2019

(1)
My love I have been waiting - here
counting snowflakes in the air
just to see, to keep and to feel your
smile and sense the smell of
flowers in your hair

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Feel the glow so bright
from the sky so high
life is quite alright
with you tonight
Dance this night so close
fell how well we flow
no pain and silent tears
in thousand years
Wind whisper the Words
words we will say
come let us dance
dance the night away

(2)
All the years are flipped as pages
in the book of our life
Both of us are pretty grey now
But i'm your man and
you are my wife

(3)
My love come sit her next to me now
come sit and warm your bones at the fire
see the moon is shining bright now
we have no time
time to retire.

fischermans

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« Reply #1 on: December 24, 2018, 07:26:52 AM »
Hello Krysoe, nice song and good production but listen, I'm not an expert in production. ;)
Only thing, I would delete the doubling of the voice, or is it reverb or whatever. Sometimes I have had the feeling that you are not 100 % in the song.
Anyway nice listen and thanks for sharing.
Merry Christmas Alexander
« Last Edit: December 24, 2018, 07:32:31 AM by fischermans »
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